What Schools are Looking for in a College Essay

Tell us what is unique about you.

Why would you stand out among all applicants? Is there something different about your personal experiences? Your response should provide us with an opportunity to get to know you on a more personal level, beyond your GPA, test scores, and curriculum.

Use recent examples.

It's always best to focus on issues that occurred while you were in high school, since we're only reviewing your high school performance when determining if you'll be admitted. If something happened when you were younger that has significantly affected you, talk about it, but then put the focus on how this event has affected you in recent years.

Watch your tone.

There's a big difference in focusing your essay on "Your school needs me as a student because..." versus "please please please admit me!"

Don't make excuses.

If you've had a poor or inconsistent grade performance due to unusual or stressful circumstances, feel free to share that information with us; it can be useful. But don't strain credibility by making up false excuses. Be honest — we'll respect that.

Be truthful, but make sure you're comfortable with your potential audience.

Students often feel compelled to share extremely personal and even traumatic experiences in their responses — health issues, death of a family member, abuse, etc. We will absolutely keep your information confidential; however, if you decide to reveal something deeply personal, be aware that a number of people will potentially be reading your essay.

Tell us why we're great.

Talk about campus programs you've attended. Tell us why you're a great fit for the school.

Remember that athletics or a great business program can be a reason, but should not be the only reason you want to attend!

           

Information adapted from the University of Michigan website